Your tests came back, and I have bad news

  • “…punish doctors who provide abortions with lengthy prison sentences.”

Not to make light of a sensitive subject, but an abortion is serious enough, without the doctor adding a prison sentence.

I think we need a verbiage transplant:

  • “…and impose lengthy prison sentences on doctors who provide abortions.”

The guilty party here, verbiologically speaking, is “with.” Nasty, imprecise little word. Check your first draft, and … well, I leave it up to you to do the right thing.

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